Thursday, May 13, 2010

True Compassion

I just want to say how happy I was that y'all liked my poems! And to tell you that I wrote more to True Compassion. :) Here it is in full.

True Compassion

I was cold
I was hungry
It was snowing
It was dark

You let me in
You made me warm
You gave me food
You showed me love
That is true compassion

I was crying
I was lonely
I was ignored
I was outcast

You wiped away my tears
You befriended me
You listened to me
You loved me
That is true compassion

I was sweating
I was thirsty
I was dying
I was alone

You shaded me
You gave be water
You saved my life
You cared about me
That is true compassion

I had sinned
I had beaten you
I deserved death
I didn't deserve compassion

You were perfect
You were beaten
You died in my place
That is true compassion


I hope you all enjoyed it. :)

More to come tomorrow!



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•The Cornet Crazie• said...

oh buttercup...i am now totally in LOVE with your poetry writings! i don't want to pressure you, but your very very good and i really really really want you to join anecdote. true compassion- it's amazing!

Anonymous said...

Love it!
Princess in Diguise