Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Poems by me

Hi! I had to do these for school so I thought I'd go ahead and share them with you. :)


George Washington

His country had chosen him,
Unanimously did they vote.
Though he dreaded to leave
His beautiful home,
His country called on him.

On that day so beautiful,
Dressed in homemade ruffles,
He took an oath,
To protect, defend, and serve his country,
The United States of America.


True Compassion

I was cold.
I was hungry.
It was snowing.
It was dark.
I was in need of compassion.

You let me in.
You made me warm.
You gave me food.
You showed me love.
That is true compassion.

I had sinned.
I had beaten you.
I deserved death.
I didn't deserve compassion.

You were perfect.
You were beaten.
You died in my place.
That is true compassion.


Tell me how you like them. :)
Buttercup :)


•The Cornet Crazie• said...

These are very good especially the second one. I'm wondering...if you like this sort of thing...if you'd like to be an author of the blog anecdote? check it out before you answer (anecdote-stories.blogspot.com)

Buttercup said...

thank you for the invitation, Cornet Crazie! I will definitely look into it! :) I usually don't write this sort of thing, but I am slowly getting it to it. :)

Anonymous said...

Oh, my!!! The second one was awesome!! I like making up poems sometimes and people think I'm good,but that 2nd was amazing! You should write more like that it's awesome(warning be careful, it's good enough for someone to take(steal) your work)

EX - Princess In Disguise